This pitch explains well the ideas that you want to include in your pitch. I like the photos that you have used because it explains your style and fashion that will be included well. The song suits the genre well also.
This is an interesting and well laid out pitch. You explain everything which will allow us to understand what your magazine will look like. The photos are picked out well which connote the style and fashion you want to have. Good pitch Tom!
Your style is very modern and appropriate for your target market. The music is good and promotes your genre effectively, I think your final magazine will look good.
Great pitch! The title is very clever, along with all the information giving me a clear image of what your final magazine will look like.
ReplyDeleteThis pitch explains well the ideas that you want to include in your pitch. I like the photos that you have used because it explains your style and fashion that will be included well. The song suits the genre well also.
ReplyDeleteSimple, cooooll, I like your name, truly brilliant idea
ReplyDeleteVery original, colour scheme works well with pitch and video sets an exciting general tone that ensures the magazine is highly anticipated.
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting and well laid out pitch. You explain everything which will allow us to understand what your magazine will look like. The photos are picked out well which connote the style and fashion you want to have. Good pitch Tom!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good pitch, very original and unique, i can see this working well as a magazine.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good pitch, very original and unique, i can see this working well as a magazine.
ReplyDeleteYour style is very modern and appropriate for your target market. The music is good and promotes your genre effectively, I think your final magazine will look good.
ReplyDeletesuch a good pitch! very clean and clear style! i also like the name
ReplyDeleteThis pitch is very good and clear. Your chosen genre is reinforced from your music and the images, I really like this pitch.
ReplyDeleteReally great pitch! Everything involving target audience is nicely tied together and the style is really innovative!
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good pitch that clearly showed the genre of your magazine through the use of images and music.
ReplyDeleteVery good pitch. The pictures that you have used show that you have a clear idea about how you wish your final magazine to look.
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